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*yawn*. happy national day. yea.
let me digress a little. as i mentioned, i kaypohed my sis' flat. pathetically small but darn good view sia. from the rooms and kitchen can see a canal (-_-||) and a little bit of sea. and from the living room, it's the "roof garden". so nice!!
back to main thing, completed my first draft. of my descriptive essay, duh. The paragraphs dun flow well and I've subconciously turn it into a narrative. what the heck was i doing?
anyway, it's so darn lengthy and crappy. It is so crappy and even I think it lacks of depth and content. shucks.
can someone nice just help me edit my 2-page handwritten narrative, uh, i mean descriptive, essay? please.